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1、gZXXKCM学易试题碧工作室精心打造/47需藕聂遨豫循线鹭0-0-占墨巧忘CrrJI【命题趋势】新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化,其中英语写作分为两部分:第一节为应用文写作;第二节为读后续写或概要写作。应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大,已为广大师生所熟悉,但是第二节的读后续写或概要写作是一种新题型1.题型介绍选材特点(1)所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;(2)多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;(2)内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况;(3)应用语法结构和词汇的
2、丰富性和准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。【满分技巧】(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右(词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分);(2)应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;(3)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;(4)续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。读后续写以读为辅,以写为主,其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力,主要包含以下四个方面:1 .把握短文关键值思和语言特点的能力;2 .语言运用的准确性和丰富性;3 .对语篇结构的把握能力;T学易试题碧工作室精心打造,4 .创造性思维能力。学检测训练(一)【新书面表达-续写作文】(2020届浙江杭州市长征中学高三上期中试题)阅读
3、下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Therewasathickforestonthesidesofamountain.Manykindsofanimalslivedintheforest.Adeerwaseatinggrassandleaveswithhertwoyoungones.Theyoungoneswanderedhappilyhereandthere.Thedeerfollowedherfawns(幼鹿)intoacave.Thedeerwasfrightenedbecauseitwasatiger,scave.Therewerebonesofdeadanima
4、lsalloverthecave.Fortunately,thetigerwasnotinsidethecaveatthetime.Thedeerwastryingtoleadheryoungonesoutofthecavewhensheheardaloudroar.Shesawthetigeratadistancecomingtowardsthecave.Itwasdangeroustogooutofthecavenow.Shethoughtofaplan.ThedeerraisedherVOiCeandshouted,Mydeeryoungchildrendonotweep.IshallC
5、aDtUre(捕捉)atigerforyoutoeat.Youcanhaveagooddinner.Thetigerheardthesewordsandbecamefrightened.Hethought,Whoseisthatstrangevoicefromthecave?Adangerousanimalisstayinginsidetocaptureme.Ishallrunawaytoescapedeath.Thetigerbegantorunawayfromthereasfastaspossible.Ajackal(胡狼)sawtherunningtiger.Whyareyourunni
6、ngingreatfear?thejackalasked.Thetigersaid,Myfriend,aDOWerfUIandfierceanimalisinmycave.Theyoungonesarecryingforatigertoeat.Themotherispromisingtocapturealigerforthem.So,Iamrunningaway.ThecunningjackalwasnowsurethetigerwasaCOWard(懦夫).Itsaid,Dontbeafraid.NoanimalisfiercerorstrongerthanatigerLetusgotoge
7、thertofindout.Butthetigersaid,Idonotwanttotakeachance.Youmayrunaway.Iwillbeleftalonetodie.So,Iwillnotcomewithyou.Thejackalsaid,Trustme.Letusknot(才了结)ourtailstogether.ThenIwillnotbeabletoleaveyou.Thetigeragreedunwillinglytothisproposal.Sothejackaltiedtheirtailsinaknot.Nowtheywalkedtowardsthecavetoget
8、her.Para.1Thedeersawthejackalandthetigercomingtogether.Para.2Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisandhewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim【参考范文】Thedeersawthejackalandthetigercomingtogether.Sheagainraisedhervoice.Sheshoutedtowardsherchildrenstandinginsidethecave,Mydearchildren,Irequestedmyfriend,thecleverjackal,toc
9、aptureatigerIF.ZXXK.COMT学易试题碧工作室精心打造,forus.Nowlookthejackalhascapturedatigertorus.Hehastiedthetiger,stailtohistail.Thisistopreventthetigerfromescaping.Youwillsoonhavethetigerfordinner.Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisandhewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim.So,thetigerdecidedtoescapefromtheterribleanimalstandi
10、nginsidehiscave.Hestartedrunning.Heforgotaboutthejackal.Hedraggedthejackaloverrocksandthorns.Inthemadescapethejackalwascaughtbetweentworocks.Thetigerpulledwithallhismight.Histailgotcut.Thejackalwaskilledinthisincident.Thetail-lesstigerranawaytoanotherpartoftheforest.Thedeerandheryoungonesleftthetige
11、r,scave.Theyjoinedtheirherdsafely.Presenceofmindandintelligencecansaveonefromdangeroussituations.(二)【新版书面表达-读后续写】(2020届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。44Whatdoyouthinkaboutmyaudilion(试奏)yesterday?Mytri11(颤音)shouldhavebeenbelter,don,tyouthink?”AbbieaskedMeIandclosedtheIidofherviolinc
12、asebeforeschool.Itsnobigdeal,Abbie,MelsaidastheyWaIkedoutthedoor.Meldidn,thavetimetoworryaboutherlittlesister,smood.Itturnedouttobeabusyday.Shehadatestinscienceclass.Shehittwohomerunsinsoftball.Afterschool,sheandherfriendstalkedabouttheirsummerplans.SheforgotabouttheauditionresultsuntilAbbiedraggedh
13、ertoIhemusicroom.Melthoughtshe,dprobablybein(hefirstviolins.MelandAbbiefoundthelistofnamesontheboard.AbbieConcerlmaster.Abbiescreamed,“Ican,tbelieveit!,ttIcan,twaittotellMumandDad!”Abbierushedtowardhome.Melkeptreading.Mel.Secondviolins.What?Therehadtobesomemistake.She,dfigureouttomorrow.WhenMelgotho
14、me,Abbiewasplayingherauditionpiecethere.MusicpouredfromAbbie,sbowlikewaterfromateapotpureandperfect.Andthetrillsoundedlikeabirdsinging.Abbiewasgood-reallygoodbutthatwasn,tthepointMrBensonmusthavemadeamistake,Melthought.Thenextmorning,Melslippedintothemusicroom.Gatheringhercourage,Melsaid,“MrBenson,I
15、wanttotalktoyouabouttheOrCheSlra(管弦乐队)seats.”44YesyoumustbeProUdofyoursister,MrBensonsmiled.44Abbieisararestudent.IfshecontinuestoDraCtiCehardandgrowasamusician,shecouldbecomeaprofessional.Thenwe,lllookbackonourlittleorchestraandthinkabouthowluckyweare.”gZXXKCM学易试题碧工作室精心打造/注意:1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2 .至
16、少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3 .续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4 .续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Melfrozeastherewasntanymix-up.Paragraph2:Afterschool,MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside,playingtheviolin.【参考范文】Melfrozeastherewasn,tanymix-up.Sherealizedshewastheonewho,dmadeamistake.Herlittlesisterhadearnedthefirstchairthrougheffo