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1、匕工袅Band9EssavBank黑匕工身Task2-Sample1Inmanycountries,smokingisnowillegalinpublicplaces.Manypeoplebelievethatsuchabanisjustified.Doyouagreeordisagree?Smokinghasbeenbannedinpublicplaceslikeparks,hospitalsandrestaurantsinmanynations,anditisalawthatmanypeoplesupport.Iagreewiththisinitiativebecauseitreduces
2、theharmfuleffectsofpassivesmokingandalsoencouragessmokerstoquit.Theprimaryreasonwhymakingitillegaltosmokeinpublicmakessenseisthatitpreventspeoplefromdevelopingdiseasesrelatedtosecond-handsmoke.Passivesmokingissomethingthatnon-smokerscannotavoidinthepresenceofasmoker;anditisjustasdangeroustopeopleshe
3、althassmoking.Abaninpublicplaceslimitsthistypeofexposure.Forexample,afterIrelanddecidedtobansmokinginallindoorworkplaces,therewasasignificantdeclineinlungcancerandotherlethaldiseasesamongrestaurantandpubworkers,leadingmanyothercountriestoadoptsimilarmeasures.Thesecondmainreasonwhythisbaniswarrantedi
4、sthatithelpsthoseaddictedtocigarettesquittheirhabit.Alawprohibitingsmokinginpublicareasforcessmokerstoleavethecompanyofeveryoneelseiftheywanttohaveacigarette.Mostpeopledislikefeelingostracised,andthiscanprovideexcellentmotivationtoquit.Forinstance,socialpressurebroughtaboutbysmokingbansisoftencitedb
5、yex-smokersasoneofthereasonstheygaveupthehabit.Inconclusion,Ibelievethatmakingitagainstthelawtosmokeinpublicshouldbeencouragedbecauseitpreventsinnocentpeoplefromdevelopingserioushealthconditionscausedbypassivesmokingandreducesthenumberofsmokers.19IELTSADVANTAGEBand 9 Essay BankIELTSADVANTAGETask2-Sa
6、mple2Somepeoplethinkthatasenseofcompetitioninchildrenshouldbeencouraged.Othersbelievethatchildrenwhoaretaughttocooperateratherthancompetebecomemoreusefuladults.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.Itisarguedthatchildrenshouldbemotivatedtobecompetitive,whileothersfeelthatteachingthemtobecooperativew
7、illbeofmorevalueastheyenteradulthood.Ibelievethatwhilecompetitioncanhelpchildrenbesuccessful,cooperationismoreimportantbecauseitteachesthemtoworkwithinateam,acrucialadultskill.Somearguethatinstillingasenseofcompetitioninchildrenhelpsthemtoachievesuccessinwhatevertheydo.Thisisbecausebeingcompetitivec
8、reatesadrivetowin,whichteachesthemthathardworkanddisciplinearethekeystosuccess.Forexample,itisoftenthecasethatchildrenwhoparticipateincompetitivesportsarelesslikelytoquitwhenthingsaredifficultandareztherefore,morelikelytoovercomeobstaclesintheirjobsasadults.Despitethis,Iwouldarguethatchildrenrequire
9、lessonsonteamworkmorethanthewilltowin.Ifchildrenaretaughttobecooperative,theylearntheimportanceofworkinginateamzwhichissomethingadultsareexpectedtodo.Throughworkingwithothers,childrenlearnnotonlyhowtorespectdifferentopinionsbutalsohowtopooltheirstrengths.Forinstance,preschoolsincludecooperationasone
10、ofthefirstskillsintheircurriculumastheyrecognisethatitisavitalsocialskillinallspheresoflife.Ithereforebelievethatteachingchildrentoworkwithothersismoreimportantthangivingthemasenseofcompetition.Inconclusion,whileinstillingasenseofcompetitioninchildrencanhelpthemsucceed,Ithinkthatteachingchildrentobe
11、cooperativegivesthemtheabilitytoworkaspartofateam,whichisfarmorevaluablelaterinlife.19IELTSADVANTAGEBand 9 Essay BankIELTSADVANTAGETask2-Sample3Someparentsthinkthatchildcarecentresprovidethebestservicesforchildrenofpreschoolage.Otherworkingparentsthinkthatfamilymemberssuchasgrandparentsarebettercare
12、giversfortheiryoungchildren.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Somearguethatwhenparentsareatwork,closerelationsprovidethebestcaretoyoungchildren,whileothersbelievedaycarecentresareabetteroption.Whilerelativescanusuallybetrustedtotakecareofchildrenproperly,Iarguethatchildcareprofessionalsarebetterequ
13、ippedtocareforyoungchildren.Manyparentsinfull-timeemploymentprefertoleavetheiroffspringwithgrandparentsorsiblingswhentheyareatworkbecausetheytrustthemmore.Thisisbecausetheyfeeltheirchildwillbesaferwithsomeonefromwithinthefamily.Forexample,workingmothersinSouthAfricaoftenasktheirparentstotakecareofth
14、eirchildrenbecausechildcarecentreshaveahighturnoverrate,whichmeanstherearetoomanynewstaffmembersthattheparentsdonotknowverywell.However;Ibelievethatafamilyconnectiondoesnotguaranteethatapersoncantakecareofyoungchildrenwell.Otherssaythatdaycarecentresareabetteroptionduetothefactthattheiremployeesares
15、killedprofessionals.Manyofthoseemployedinthesecentreshavebeenrigorouslytrainedinhowtonurturechildrensgrowth,andtheyare,therefore,abletoprovideasuitablelevelofcaretoanychildplacedundertheirsupervision.Forinstance,mostchildcarecentresindevelopedcountriesrequiretheiremployeestohavecompletedcertificates
16、inearlychildhooddevelopment.Forthisreason,Ithinkthatthechildrenleftinthecareofthesecentresarebetterlookedafter.Inconclusion,althoughsomeparentsmaypreferthebondoftrustinherentwithinafamilywhenchoosingacaregiverfortheirchildren,thisessayfindsthatchildrenarebetteroffunderthecareofdaycarecentresduetotheirstaffsprofessionaltrainingandexperience. 阈囱 IELTS ADVANTAGE!息篇Band9EssavBankTask2-Sample4Lifewasbetterwhentechnolo
